Holistic Feedback

ReportOverallSTUDENT02, on a scale of one to six, your response to this assignment was rated a 3. Your response was evaluated on the basis of how well it communicates its message considering important areas of writing including focus and meaning, content and development, organization, language use and style, and mechanics and conventions.A response that receives a score of three communicates its message to a limited degree. Typically, a response at this level has some evidence of purpose, but that may not be totally clear and/or may lack a continued focus on the main idea. While there is evidence of development, there is typically a lack of support and supporting detail. There is some evidence of organization, but with limited order and sequence of ideas present. The sentence structure shows some errors in sentence structure, with little variety and noticeable errors in usage and word choice. The response typically shows poor word choice and usage with several distracting errors in mechanical conventions such as spelling and punctuation. A more detailed analysis of your response is provided for each of the five important writing areas below. Writing Analysis Your response was also evaluated in terms of five important traits of writing, focus and meaning, content and development, organization, language use and style, and mechanics and conventions. Each of the five areas was evaluated on a scale ranging from one to six.